My agent will reject your manuscript if she sees these two things.

LY’s will dig the grave. Lazy attributions will make the kill.

My nephew the writer. DHY Watercolor
  1. LY’s.
The Evil Monster LY will kill your writing faster than a speeding sharpened pencil. DHY Watercolor.

Repeat: LY’s will kill your manuscript, especially when coupled with lazy attributions.

My agent’s tips:

Is there a way to put these killers where they belong? DHY Watercolor

Writer. Artist. Ex-politician. Old woman.